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My classmate

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My Classmate

李文杰  七(16)班

Hi, I am Jack. Today, I’ll introduce one of my classmates to you. Look at this picture. Who is this handsome boy? Yes, he is my good friend Gogo. We are also in the same class.

He is an excellent and happy boy. He is good at study, sports and playing computer games. Sometimes I think he was born as a winner. Last week, when I played at home, he came to my home and said, “Come on, Jack. I want to PK with you. Let’s play ping-pong.” I said OK. Then we went to the school for the “match”. After the fierce competition, I won finally this time. “Today, you’re the winner, but tomorrow I will win back.” The next day, we went to school playing ping-pong again. And as he said, he won.

He is my classmate Gogo. We are competitors and good friends. I know we will make progress together. Do you like him?

 

评语:本文作者向我们描述了一位可爱上进的同学。通过小事件的叙述,我们看到了一对“互斗互促”的好朋友。望我们都能拥有这样的益友。在“PK”中进步,在进步中沉淀友谊。

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