Doing sports is a good way to keep healthy. There are various kinds of sports activities, including ball games like basketball, football, as well as other activities like swimming and hiking. Among them, I like swimming best!
At the age of six, my parents taught me how to swim. They let me know we shouldn’t be afraid of water, but played with it as a friend. I learned it step by step, and sometimes I could even have a game with my families. Swimming was so interesting that I was fond of it from then on.
I believe that life lies in movement. As we know, loving sports is the love of life. Swimming is a good way to keep healthy and be happy. What about your favorite sport? Can you share with me?
作者:八5班 陈翀
教师评语:孩子描述了自己最喜爱的运动时,同时还加入了自己与家人一起运动的感想,使游泳这样简单的运动充满了感情和生命力。文章不仅写出自己对运动的喜欢,更是表达出孩子家庭和睦的幸福感。
指导老师:傅小翠